My yarn presentation

Introduction
Ah yeah goo day mate my names James Scoble and the day I remember the most was getting kicked to death. It was all like bang one hit 10 kicks in my face lost most of my teeth 3 teeth left from that one person 3 men to go.
Im in for it I’m going to die. That OK no one cares about me anyway. No one heard of me.
What happened I move from Scotland to here for a happy life Why am i
a target these troopers always putting up the Prices… trooper scums.

What a mistake to come back to the hotel after hours will I was drunk. I forced my way in here and was confront. The men that killed me got of free because police owed him money.

 

A yarn is a day the are  characters will remember the most and where famous for.

4 comments

  1. Hi Mate,

    I like your post, it never gets old. Keep up the good work. Maybe next time tell what your doing.

    Cheers

    Dan,

  2. Hey Josh,
    My star for you is that you had a great recount about James Scobie dying.
    My second star is that you had good describing words in your yarn.

    My first wish for you is that you check some spelling.

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